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Re: Not my Own Chapter 1
Thank you! I couldn't have done it without all the help!
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: Not my Own Chapter 1
Hi Suzuhara! Thanks so much for the advice! Wow, I didn't know all that... I'll redo the chapter as quick as possible. I'm usually write fanfiction or fantasy, so this ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Not my Own Chapter 1
Hi! Thanks so much for the feedback! I edited it, so I hope it's better now. I'm glad someone took the time to help little old me.
Dec 8, 2009